I wrote a poem of things I like and things I don’t like. Each line has to link e.g. fruit, animal or food. It was very fun to do, for me to be able to do this I had to do it on a google drawing. Here is the poem I did I really hope you enjoy reading it:)
Hi Vivienne,
I liked the bunny at the corner and the pink clouds and the font works well with the background.
I like what things you pick for the like and don’t like.
But the words isn’t in the middle you should move the words to middle.
Do you actually not like frogs?
have a good day.
From Amber
Hi Vivienne.
I really liked the background of your DLO.
This reminded me of when I did my I like but I don’t like poem.
Next time you could add a little more because it was a little bit short.
Did you enjoy making your poem?
Kia Ora Vivienne,
I like how you used the clouds as your background and added a bunny to show us something you like. You taught me some things about you that I did not know before! Next time you could add some more pictures?
Question time! Do you like ice cream popsicles? The kind of ones that have ice cream on a stick?
Bye for now!
Lily 🪷
Hi Vivienne
I really like your I like and I don ´ t like poem did you think about adding a bit more colours to it I also liked how you added the bunny in the conner it really stands out. Maybe next time you could add a bit more it was a bit short. Question time do you also like pandas.
From Katie